读后续写练习写作指导讲义--高三英语复习写作专项

I.原题重现

阅读下面材料，依据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

I'd always loved to sing and had signed up for the school talent show in fourth grade when started stuttering(口吃).

I consulted speech experts but it didn't help. I did everythingI could to rid my stutter, but nothing changed. I was very confused. If I couldn't bring myself to speak in class, how would I be able to sing in the school talent show? I decided to practice at home. To my amazement, the words came smoothly when I sang. My stutter disappeared. I felt so free on stage performing in the talent show. After that, I joined my school team and began learning how to play the guitar.

By the summer I was 16, severe anxiety and depression set in. My stutter had bee my entire identity, and I was afraid to talk at all. I didn't tell anyone how I was feeling.

One burning hot August afternoon, I went to the basement for the coolness, where I kept my musical equipment. My eyes lit on the guitar I had gotten for my thirteenth birthday. I picked it up and started playing it casually. Then I opened my mouth, and the words came flooding out.

Last

year,

I

started

college

at

Liberty

University

in

Lynchburg,Virginia, where I'm majoring in music production. When I saw the America's Got Talent announcement pop up on my puter, I signed up. A couple of months later, there I was—standing on that huge stage in Pasadena, trying to calm my nerves as I introduced myself to

the America's Got Talent judges and audience.

“I have a bit of speech disorder,〞 I told everyone there. “It was definitely something that caused me to.…〞 I took a long pause to find the words. “…to shy away, to hide. But I found that I don't stutter when I sing.〞

Then I launched into a new song I'd written, titled Back to Life. I tried to focus on the music, not all the eyes on me. And just as I'd said, there was no stutter at all.

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II.文脉梳理

文章叙述了作者在4班级时酷爱唱歌并报名了校内才艺秀。然而，作者此时竟消失口吃现象，深受困扰。

作者为治愈口吃询问专家门，但是没有什么效果。作者自卑和退缩之心油然而生。直到有一天，当作者在家唱歌时，口吃竟然消逝了。后来，作者参与了学校的才艺表演并参加学校才艺组，学习吉他。

然而，在作者16岁时，焦虑和抑郁再次让作者发生口吃现象。作者便于8月份的一个下午一个人去地下室乘凉弹吉他。通过弹唱音乐，作者唱歌吐字流畅，找回了自信。

最终，作者参与了?达人秀?，尽力克服口吃畏惧，渐渐讲话顺畅，也大胆地呈现了自己的音乐才华。

III.试题亮点

答案很开放，不拘一格，能真正考查考生的规律思维、、批判思维及创新思维。切中新高考命题脉搏。

缘由是：一个主题，多向奔赴，答案不唯一。

本篇文章的主题凝练为：特长爱好·自信·克服不完善·走向胜利

本篇文章的主题达成渠道可以至少排列组合为： 1)特长让我自信,自信让我胜利; 2)利用特长,扬长避短,取得胜利;

3)利用个人特长和爱好治愈人生不完善。

IV.一个主题,多元答案 01.答案

When I finished, the whole crowd was on its feet, and so were the judges. I couldn't believe it! One of the judges told me I had a pure and beautiful voice. He and the other judges gave me the four votes I needed to advance to the next round of the petition. I couldn't hold back my tears. My wildest dreams were ing true, dreams I'd never thought possible. Though I placed fifth in the semifinal and didn't advance to the final. I was not at all depressed, for I had discovered something about myself: I do really well under pressure.

Since the show aired, I've been invited to play on different occasions. I even performed in the halftime show at a Super Bowl game. Being on America's Got Talent has opened many doors for me, but I

realize that taking up music as my career is by no means easy. Still, after the experiences of the past year, I'm more fortable putting myself out there, taking the risk that I might get denied or rejected. So far the risks have been rewarded: I have recently signed with a famous record pany, and I'm genuinely excited and grateful.

02.下水文

When I finished, the whole crowd was on its feet, and so were the judges.The applause and cheers lasted so long that I couldn't help shedding tears. I hadn't expected everything went so smoothly. For years, my stutter has been making continuous troubles with me, causing me to feel inferior and crazy. I would hide myself in the dirty and shabby basement to gain a bit fort. However, my singing proved that I could do it. I picked up my confidence and spiritI was no longer a lowdown stuttering boy.

Since the show aired, I've been invited to play on different occasions. Ranging from public speeches to art festivals, I showed up at quite a lot of events. I stood on the stages and shared my past heartily with the enthusiastic viewers, among whom there were always people lacking in normal ability or basic confidence. During holidays, I also invited them to the same basement and cheered them up either through music or in words. My passion for music not only cured my fault but also forted the whole world！