My favorite sport----basketball
Eason GESE6
(指导老师:李倩)
Hello, I’m Eason. Today my topic is my favorite sport------basketball.
I am crazy about playing basketball and I have played it for more than 5 years. sir/madam, do you like playing basketball?
20秒开场白让考官迅速了解自己要讲解的话题,同时不要忘记开篇反问,既符合考试要求,又有利于话题的展开.
1. Why do I enjoy playing basketball?
I like playing basketball not only because it is now very popular all over the world, but also because I am passionate about it
On a Saturday morning in 2005 while I was six, I watched a live NBA basketball game with my dad. It was at that time that I started to know basketball. The game was exciting and Michael Jordan was so amazing that I often watch NBA live games and play basketball with my Dad from then on.
I have benefited a lot from playing basketball.
Firstly, playing basketball requires team work. If players play individually without cooperating with others, they will not win the match. To win the game, everyone need trust each other, and I enjoy the feeling of being trusted very much.
Secondly, playing basketball is an aerobic exercise. If I can make playing
basketball as a hobby, I will become more flexible and my heart and muscles will get stronger than before. Now, I am the tallest in my grade and I am very proud of this.
Sir, do you think playing basketball is very good for our health?
本段主要介绍了Eason何时何地开始爱上篮球,以及描述了篮球给他自己带来的好处:学会信任与合作,可以让身体更协调、更健康。本段多处运用到了六级新增的语法项目,如第一条件句,情态动词need,以及不定式表目的。另外本段还运用了其他几个漂亮的短语和句型,如not only….but also…,强调句 it is…..that, be done被动语态等,这些短语和句型的变化使文章增色不少。
2. How long have I played basketball?
I started to play basketball with my dad in 2005. However, I began to have formal basketball training until I joined the school basketball team in 2006. I have been playing basketball for 6 years.
I have learnt a lot about basketball from my coach who always tells us the importance of team-work. Each one is part of the team. A team-mate need cooperate with each other and trust each other, and I like the feeling of being trusted. So this team work game is more interesting and exciting than other individual games.
I also believe that playing basketball will benefit my health. If I keep playing, my heart and muscles will be stronger and my body will be more flexible. Mum says me that if I want to be an NBA Star, I must play very hard. Thus, I will not cease my step playing basketball.
本段除了说出了自己从2006年起打篮球至今已经有了6年的时间外,同时还叙述了一些打篮球的益处,这和第一段某种程度上是重合的。这告诉学生,有时候几个点之间可能是相通的,在回答考官问题时,我们可灵活地就相关的和相似的内容进行回答和展示。
语言方面除了用到了六级的语法点,同时还有比较级、被动语态、现在完成时、现在完成进行时、定语从句等语法项目。这些语法项目对Eason有一定的挑战性,在叙述时要特别注意语速要适中,语音语调要自然些,不要有太明显的背诵痕迹。
3. Which basketball team in NBA do I prefer?
There are many good teams and excellent players in NBA. But I prefer Los Angeles Lakers to other basketball teams and I like Kobe best. Sir/Madam, have you heard about Kobe in Los Angeles Lakers? (展示湖人和科比的照片)
Kobe is my favorite basketball star. He has presented us very excellent performances during the whole season. The reason why Lakers is so successful is that they emphasize the team-work sprite.
这一部分是考官最感兴趣的地方,Eason还准备了一些关于科比的照片,这样在考试的时候能够更加形象地介绍自己的话题,同时这一部分的图片展示也会让谈话更加自然。there be句型、现在完成时以及表语从句的运用也都是本段的亮点,值得大家学习和借鉴。
4. What was the most unforgettable basketball match that I have ever attended?
The most unforgettable match that I’ve ever attended was the one with my school mates this spring. At that time, we had a three-to-three competition. I played for Class Eight and we got 3 points, however, our rival---Class Five got 4 points. Although, we were all depressed at that time, we did our best to catch up with them. However, we still lost the game because of our immature skills.
Although we were not the champion, we got a better understanding of the importance of team work and the spirit of supporting each other. If we want to win the match, we must cooperate with each other. So the next time when we had a basketball match with Class Two, we played harder and supported each other. We beat them at 9 to 0. We got a big applause from our classmates. How wonderful it was !
本段Eason介绍了自己最难忘的一次篮球比赛,因为这次比赛的失败让他明白了合作的重要性,从而在后来的比赛中获胜并赢得掌声。本段中although, however,because of等连词的运用恰到好处。同时本段还运用了if条件句,这个语法项目的运用使行文更加流畅,同时也体现了小作者的语言功底。
5. What will I do to improve my basketball skills this year?
To improve my skills, I need practice more and attend more matches this year.
On one hand, to strengthen my physical flexibility(身体的灵活性), I need exercise more to practice my skills of lay-up, jump shot, set shot and so on so forth.
On the other hand, to be an experienced center-forward (中锋), I will take part in more matches in my school team. From each match, I can get the feeling of being eager to win. I need calm down myself in face of hard competition.
本段Eason主要写了如何提高自己的篮球技巧的打算,以及如果想成为一名经验丰富的中锋必须要有能够勇于面对困难的决心。本段中运用了三一六级不定式、情态动词、连接词语等语法项目。Eason在介绍自己如何提高篮球技巧时,提到了lay-up, jump shot, set shot等篮球技巧这些词汇,这样具体的描述使得文章知识性强,内容真实贴切,从而也提高了语言质量。
6. My plan to watch the NBA games in person in the future.
If I have lots of money, I will go to Los Angles to watch Lakers’ performance in person. Los Angles is a beautiful city to the east coast of the Unite States. I have never been there before. I am planning my trip even I haven’t got enough money now.
Firstly, I need get some information about NBA games in advance, including the match schedule of Lakers, the NBA rules and some English NBA jargons.(术语)
Secondly, to make sure I can meet Kobe in Los Angles, I have to book tickets in advance.
Thirdly, I need to prepare some personal things for this trip, like my passport and visa, a guide book, an English dictionary, a map of Los Angles, iPod, clothes and so on.
In a word, I am looking forward to the trip of Los Angles in the future. But there is a key issue: I need financial support for the trip.
本段主要写的是作者的一个打算:如果有机会将会去洛杉矶看球。 I am planning体现了六级现在进行时表将来的用法,同时还运用上了第一条件句、情态动词,不定式表目的等语法项目。值得借鉴的是,最后Eason提到了需要经济支持,可能会引发相关的本级别的关于金钱的话题,大家可以根据已经准备的关于金钱的话题来回答考官的提问。
另外很重要的一点是在三一考试中,考前话题准备地越充分,就越有益于考试现场的稳定发挥,所以我和Eason多准备了一些自选话题和三一6级对话话题相关的问题用于平时的练习,如让自己话题与rules, money, fashion结合。这是考官提问自主话题的一种思路,所以同学们在平时训练时一定要灵活运用和迁移话题内容。其中我们补充的其他话题点如下:
1. Are there any rules you need to obey when you are playing basketball?
2. Do you think playing basketball is an expensive hobby?
3. Who is your favorite Chinese basketball players?
4. Is it very fashionable to play basketball in your school?
5. Do you think playing basketball is a very fashionable sport? Why or why not?
6. What does NBA stand for?
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