Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to your parents or any other family member upon making a memorable achievement. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
【参考范文】 Dear Sister,
I am writing this letter to extend my heartfelt appreciation to you for memorable achievement in the National Oral English Contest in 2005.（开篇开门见山提出主题）
The main reasons for this are as follows. To begin with, everything you did in the contest inspire me for a really long time. Because of your encouragement, I made my decision to take the Contest in 2005. In addition, all the books and suggestions you gave me during my preparation help me a lot. Without your help, how could it be possible for me to won the contest? Last but not least, everything you taught me encourages me to be an English teacher and influence an increasing number of college students.（中间分三部分论述原因）
I would like to take this great opportunity to express my heartfelt gratitude to the help you render me.（结尾点题）
Yours sincerely, Yun Pan Render v.给予
heartfelt gratitude衷心的感激 模拟题
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Cheating on Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1.在大学里存在着考试作弊的现象； 2.你是怎么看待这一现象的； 3.如何才能制止这种现象。
Cheating on exams is becoming a serious problem on campus. 23% of stude nts have ever been found doing so on their exams. Some of them copy from each other, some take out their textbooks or reference books to copy, still some use th e modern communication tools such as mobile phone as a way to get related info rmation. It is obvious that cheating on exams has bad effect on students' academi c performances as well as morality practices.
Many remarkable factors contribute to the cheating in exams. Firstsome stu dents just play time away and want to pass the exam without efforts. And some s tudents are under great pressure from parents and they fear to fail the exams. Se cond, college or universities must bear the blame for their placing more emphasi s on grades than learning. Rigid（严格的，死板的） grading system promotes cheating.
How can such a phenomenon be eliminated? In my opinion, there are two ways we can adopt. First of all, a severe punishment should be put into effect to p revent students from cheating. In addition, we should
reform our examination system to make it a real effective tool to measure studen ts' abilities.
[评析]
本文的第一段指出考试作弊在很多大学里是一个很严重的问题，通过数字说明问题的严重性，主题句的提出显得有理有据。接着列举了学生的各种作弊手段。第二段主题句“Many remarkable factors contribute to the cheating in exams.”
显示本段的主要内容是分析考试作弊的原因，分别从学生和学校
实行的制度两个方面进行分析。第三段提出根除作弊现象的措施。本文段落之间的衔接自然得体，如第三段开头用了一个问句
“How can such an unhealthy phenomenon be eliminated?”，很自然地将话题转到如何制止作弊上来了。各个段落内部扩展句之间的逻辑层次清晰，分析透彻。如结尾段在阐述采取何种措施根除作弊时，用first of all, in addition表现了两种措施逻辑与意义上的关系
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